Rough Cut

• We need more close up of Cristian as he doesn't come across as the main artist.
• We need to allow for Cristian to finish his words, instead of cutting away before he finishes.
• Try to cut on the beat.
• Show the development into the night shots; we could shoot some sunset shots to do this.
• We need jump shots when we are performing to follow Vernallis theory. 
• Some of our shots are too long we need to make them shorter to follow the fast pace of the rap genre.